Saturday, July 12, 2008

The 1st page of my story...


4 comments:

Kevin Lau said...

lol..nice layout..but 1 prob i face..black colour wordings wif dark brown bg makes it hard to read..

Yeu Jian said...

ya ya.. i agree kevin said.. because brown is a medium tone.. so, is quite hard to read the words.. ^^

Colleen a.k.a Aya said...

yup... agree with kevin n yeu jian...
the words are quiet hard for reading...
maybe u can try change the words to white / yellow colous?
or else u nid to change the background colour for the words.

Wei Nye said...

I agree with Kevin, Yeu Jian and Colleen. Can't really see the fonts too well. Try a lighter color, maybe? :)